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Cuz I use the phrase "my heart just stopped..." when commenting on breathtaking deviations.

:icondefibplz: plz account :- ) :icondefibplz:

Edit: Made a couple small changes. Didn't want to change the blue emote's expression cuz I think the proper expression while defibbing someone ought to be continual alarm lol. And I kept a 1.5-second gap between shocks because I want the blue emote to wait a second to see what'll happen, for "maybe his heart'll start now...maybe? no? ok, shock him again!"
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

"Someone just past out down in the lobby, and isn't coming too! I need a Defibrillator!" (moments later) "Here, do you know how to use it?"

Ha yes, it really doesn't matter what kind of public place your in, a shopping center, a restaurant or even a hospital, you call for it and almost any information center has one... at least that's what I was told in a first aid cause at 10 years old...

This emote really shows the scene well, however it could be improved. I find the actual animation of the unconscious one very good, the bounce is well done and the hands and eye move separately to the body. however I think some minor changes to make it a bunch better, e.i. The blue one's expression never changes which makes him seem a li'l awkward, the time between the end, the word "Clear" appearing and the jolt seem... I'm not sure, a bit long, I wouldn't want it too long but... Anyway apart from that, nice colouring, and the electric bolts at good.

Good stuff, just a li'l awkward, lost points on the impact there... :/ Just don't make a CPR one xD (<- Jokes, that would be awesome if you did! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /> )

-Plar